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COME INTO MY ARMS The Arrival - 1

Book By: bubbly
Romance


A mid-age love. Love does not happen in childhood, in teens or in twenties alone. Cupid can strike in 40s. This is the story of a single and successful woman, who found love unexpectedly. And discovered age was no bar to love for the older - the better and maturer. Old-fashioned love, where hearts are exchanged, feelings r mutual and caring is obvious. THIS IS A FIVE-PART BOOK. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 20, 2008    Reads: 577    Comments: 63    Likes: 34   


Sophia saw the new arrival from her bedroom window on the first floor. She was busy giving shape to her new novel and when an exciting point had come, she found her head jerk up to noise of the moving truck. Her concentration was broken. And she sighed. Now she will have to wait for her mood to be recharged to continue writing. She cursed the truck and the noise.
 
There were new arrivals everyday. She had seen her community of Coventry Hills in Calgary growing up steadily over the years. Calgary has seen the oil boom in recent years that had set Alberta’s economy, thereby of Canada’s on a firm footing. Not only immigrants but people from other provinces continues to pour in, in search of a good job.
 
She loved Coventry Hills, away from the hustle-bustle of Downtown and secluded in its single homes in North East. It was all she had ever desired. She had good neighbours and privacy, the last one too essential for her writing. She loved to write. It was an outlet for all she couldn’t do in her real life. What ever she desired, came alive through her words on paper.
 
She sighed. Now she won’t be able to write anymore for the day. So as well sit back, pour a cup of fresh coffee and see them unloading the furniture. She couldn’t remember how far back she went in her writing, perhaps ten or eleven. Although her job as the Head of the Department of English at the University didn’t leave her with much time, still she managed to key-in parts essential to make a whole.
 
Now her novel was taking shape. And this novel was so crucial to her. It was almost autobiographical. Almost. For she wanted to keep fiction apart from facts and reel from real. But at this juncture in her life, she felt the need to bring it all before readers. To know their reactions about her life. The reader would read it as fiction but the real story would be central to it.
 
It was early morning on a Saturday. Calgary hadn’t seen very many sunny and warm days for remained cold and chilly throughout the year. The worst was between -40 and -50. Some summers were warm too with temperatures going up to 34 but that was it. The weather in Calgary was so unpredictable that forecasts are not always accurate. It changes by the hour.
 
Despite its cold, Sophia preferred Calgary to any other city in Canada. It had everything she could go for. She was almost 42, single, attractive, too independent, and extremely well-to-do. She had traveled all over the world. One more holiday was round the corner. It had been a busy year academically. Each lecture of hers sent a thrill through her. She felt the same excitement that was alive when she did MPhil and PhD. The research work was worth its while when she was conferred with a Doctorate.
 
There wasn’t any aspect of her life that she didn’t like. She was in love with life itself. There was so much to do that she didn’t feel the need for anyone in her life. She was too filled with the educational and economical part of her life that emotional attachments became secondary. She lived for herself for that was the way to live.
 
Once she had craved for marriage, husband, children, home and other things. But life was so fast that the most integral part was overtaken by a career. Now she couldn’t care less. She had only one life to live and she lived it according to her will and wish. Let everything come to her. There was time for everything. When something has to happen, it will. She couldn’t let events describe her life.
 
And the most important part of her life was the world inside her mind. It was a thriving universe of all things she wanted to be but could not be. If she wished to be a kid, a character was created and she transported herself to her childhood phase. If love was part of her writing, she brought alive lovers who sang ditties and swore eternal togetherness. Her mind was the most thriving section in Calgary although Calgarians were aware of their thriving economy alone.
 
The coffee had gone stale. She got up and went down to the kitchen. There was silence all around except for occasional noises from the truck and the unloaders. This will continue the whole day. She made a fresh pot of coffee and opened a pack of her favourite cookies. Her grey cells worked well when she munched and watched cable. She may as well watch the news on cable. But this didn’t last long for news was as stale as her earlier coffee.
 
She switched off the TV. Humming a tune, she went back to her bedroom and switched on the Internet. Life came alive on Internet. There was so much variety and spice that she could never give up on it. In her childhood, people used to be awed when someone possessed a radio. And that was in the 60s. Then came black and white TV and the scene of entertainment changed a bit. Vinyl LP records were the rage and she remembered ABBA and Boney M, her then favourite bands.
 
It was with the arrival of color TV that her perception changed. She could sit before it the entire day but her parents won’t allow it. Then audio cassette players and VCRs almost simultaneously came out. Both audio and video markets thrived. People never had it so good. Then CDs and DVDs brought new excitement to life. And now even MP3s have become passé. Now, HD TV, cable and Internet revolutionised her world. On her weekends, an ipod nano was her idea of music. Technology had made amazing advances.
 
But she still retained the old world charm for there was nothing to beat it. No matter where science could advance, the roots would remain grounded to earth. And to her, childhood was the most important phase of her life. It was almost magical. She missed it.
 
Somehow even the Internet couldn’t hold her interest today. What was happening to her. She cursed the new arrival. It was all due to it that her concentration was broken and now she was clueless to her next step.


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Comments:

What can I say that hasn't already been mentioned? I'm registered on a number of sites, and usually I see the same thing time after time - lots of overt sexual references, too much foul language and not enough plot-building.

You, on the other hand, hold the reader's interest in the palm of your hand. This is a fine start to a story which could go any which way you please. Saw 'What Lies Beneath' the other night, and your start reminds me of the first part of the film when the tension is carefully built up to a crescendo.

I don't have a clue where you are going with this, and that's what makes the story worth following. I didn't know you wrote prose, although your poetry's good too.

Phil

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phil. u make me feel i'm sitting on top of the world. at least for today i can act a queen. (although i know my reality as a commoner but ur comment soars my spirits.) they don't make like u anyore. i hope i can live upto ur expectations. thanx for such a cheerful comment. lol. ;-)

loads of suspense so far...waiting patiently for the two to meet. A good intro. Love it

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! deb. this suspense won't hold for long. thanx for reading it. lol. ;-)

I love it you are right there are no bounders for love even age can’t wait for more of your wonderful books.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! angel. i'm glad u found CIMA wonderful. it's true, love knows no barriers and age doesn't matter. but a loving heart always does. makes the world a better place to live in. thanx a lot. gee. ;-)

I liked it! Keep it up, since I like romance. I hope there's more...

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ana. that makes two of us. i dig romances. i'm glad there's someone to share my space. more power to u. lol. ;-)

It seems really good to me, keep up the amazingly well articulated work.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rachel. thanx for a refreshing comment that'll keep my day cheerful. lol. ;-)

Great detail and background; its rly good, cant wait to read more :)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ant. thanx for a wonderful comment. hope u like what's in next. lol. ;-)

A lovely start to a good book. I can see my self curled up in a blanket sitting near a window, with a cup of hot chocolate reading this. I like it and can't wait for the next installment!
Hugs and Hearts~
Justine

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! itania. ur description matches a lover of books, lost in her own world, away from the real world. and u've a pretty good imagination too to come up with an imrpomptu comment.

and i do need all ur hugs and hearts. (i've already stored them safely in the safe. i can't take any risk of them being stolen. i'm very possessive. ha! haa!! haaa!!!) lol. ;-)

I did not want to stop reading. I was swept away and I for a moment forgot about the humming of my radiator that has been annoying me all evening. I want more, but I pray that your next chapter is not predictable. No man in shining armour, something real and grounded.

Well Done!! Loved It!!

Cheers, Kezacoop x

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kezacoop. wow. u've far exceeded my expectations from a comment. this story'll remain grounded in earth. no knight in shining armor but a hot-blooded male with love in heart to set any female (me included) fall in love. thanx a lot for such a radiating comment. loved it. lol. ;-)

I love this story so far. I have to agree with everyone else, you show such detail, background and emotions with this story. It is really great, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Excellent job my friend. :)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mikey. thanx for such a wonderful comment. friends like u keep my spirits high and soaring. thanx for being a dear friend. lol. ;-)

that's really a good beginning........and it's quite true.........love can happen -with anyone,anywhere,of any age,at any time!!

really looking forward to more of it!!

And i would be glad if you could go through some of my previous work.......i haven't put up anything new lately because i was involved with admission for college and all........


anyways great job !! ^-^

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kritika. thanx for liking CIMA. u r a dear. lol. ;-)

i enjoyed readin this i can't wait to read more

it's very good

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rafael. thanx for finding it enjoyable. i'm touched. gee. ;-)

This is a great story, many romantic stories always use language or involve only the sex, I just know that, and what you have here is an original masterpiece. I have never seen a romantic book, or one that I heard of, having a Canadian, independent, and down-to-Earth woman. I enjoy this story so much, and that's just the first chapter!...I think. Well anyways, I hope you do more, this is getting REALLY good!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kamikaze. thanx. coming from u, it's high praise indeed. i hope i can live upto ur expectations. thanx again. ;-)

Great story. I agree with KamiKaze, every romance stories I've heard or seen only involved language, but this is original in its own right. Update me.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dezbee. thanx for liking it. readers like u r any writer's delight. for u provide the impetus to write further. thanx again. gee. ;-)

I liked it, but I'm not a big one for a lot a detail. I still like it though! Can't wait for part 2!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! queen. v all've our reading preferences. but thanx for still going ahead reading it and commenting. i really appreciate it. lol. ;-)

I love it! Keep it up, your writing style is amazing! =)
~Maple Bowen

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! maple. thanx for finding CIMA interesting. lol. ;-)

got me interested. look forward to the next chapter. be sure and let me know when its up. snow

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! snowbelle. thanx for a lovely comment. gee. ;-)

Very nice, Bubbly! You've captured my attention and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for bringing this to my attention, I enjoyed reading it. Be sure to let me know when you post the next part!

Stephanee :)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! stephanee. thanx for looking forward to it. readers like you keep a writer on their feet. i like that for usually i'm a lazy bum (seriously). lol. ;-)

wow!! I loved it. it was great. good job. Make a nother one!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! sarah. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

I loved this Bubbly....first chapter is great....and i want to read all of them....

please do keep me informed,....i liked the concept too....and Calgary sounds real cold......

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pratibha. thanx for a wonderful comment. calgary is extremely cold but denizens compensate for it by offering warm hospitality. u r invited to calgary and u can stay at my place (if that's ok with u). this is my city. lol. ;-)

how come novels have chapters and books don't? it doesn't makes sense at all, aren't they the sane thing?

Anyway, great book and a wonderful story line!!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! leanne. even i've wondered on that front for books'll've parts/chapters. i guess, for now it'll be individual parts for the same work. and thanx for finding CIMA storyline wonderful. gee. ;-)

Hello,
o.k Bubbly ur first chapter was interesting and it aroused the readers curiosity. But you have to work on the editing of this piece,there are countless grammatical errors in this piece, i counted no less than six in the first two paragraphs alone. You really need to work on these. they take too much away from your story, plus the story becomes a lot less gripping when you constantly look at grammatical errors.
I hope you don't mind this but take a look at the excerpt of the first chapter i put up from my romantic novel. Alice, Urja and everyone else pointed out many editing mistakes which i am working on. Alice actually wrote a 900 word plus comment. So take this as a challenge.
I wish my typing was faster and i could point out each and every mistake but its taken me ten minutes writing even this much LOL.
The pace of the story is good, but you have to get a little bit more descriptive regarding ur main character. Bring out her emotions and thoughts with reflective dialogues. When describing surroundings make sure you describe all aspects of it, sight, smell and looks. Try to start each sentence with a different word than the preceding one, this makes your narrative more free flowing. I will be back later to give you more pointers if you want. Sorry if i have offended you, that is not my intention. I think of you as a friend and honesty is the most important thing in friendship.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! azmat. thanx. well, this critical advice is what i always look forward to from u. till the time, u'll add to my work, u'll keep me engaged. and i always go for that. this is only a piece of work. thrash it more so that it solidifies as gold. remember, constructive criticism is a life giver to any writing and i read it more carefully.

as this is my first draft, i didn't look that carefully into the aspects u r pointing out. u r a keen and observant reader and i'll improve on this. I'LL LOOK FORWARD TO ALL UR POINTERS. u've made my day.

i've read most of ur work although i may not've commented on a few. i've read the novel but i didn't comment as i'm not into novels for now, time being a casualty. i read those intense comments (they could make for another article.) u r extremely lucky to find such analytical readers, who can add to ur work positively. and i wish u all the best for writing a novel. it'll need total dedication, commitment and concentration from u. lol. ;-)

It's good so far, very descriptive, I can feel it's leading on to something big. :D Great job =]

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ashen. thanx for a wonderful compliment. lol. ;-)

Well I'm not one for reading romance books, so I really don't know what to say.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! df. someday, i'm sure u'll fall in love and romance when ur prince charming'll arrive on ur scene. so prepare for that by reading romance. lol. ;-)

Thank you for inviting me to read you latest work. I enjoyed it very much. I like you main character and want to learn more about her. You a talented writer. I hope you make big money on your writing some day if not all ready.

More please. You have me hooked.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! alex. thanx for a wonderful comment. i can think better now. readers like you are a tremendous boost to any author. gee. ;-)

it's good :D

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! april. thanx for liking it. gee. ;-)

oh la laaa
I like it
:]
can't wait for more
:]
(you got double smilies)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! thanx for likng it. and ur double smiles added a smile on me. thanx again. lol. ;-)

Bubbly, This is good Work and its wonderfully written. So far I read your opening and it seems quite interesting. I will defiantly be following to the end. Please keep me posted when you add chapters. Oh and I love the title.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! vee. thanx for liking it and also the title. this makes me heave a sigh of relief. lol. ;-)

I'm not into romance, romance novels that is, but this kept my interest. It moved along well and I wanted to read more. Great start. Sometimes I had to re-read a sentence or two,(maybe punctuation?) but maybe that's me. Good Job. Can't wait to find out what's next. Ted

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ted. thanx a lot for an encouraging read. coming from a published author, that says a lot. i hope i can better it next time. thanx again. ;-)

I love Calgary!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it, love it love it love it.. Yes it's cold but I love it!!!!! I miss it too.
Great plot line. It's interesting.
~Kaori

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kaori. and calgary is my city as mcu as Edmonton is yours. great twin cities of alberta. thanx for liking the first part. i hope i don't come down on your expectations. ur opinion matters a lot to me (as always). thanx a lot. lol. ;-)

i have the urge to read this over and over until the next part comes in...... ^_^ nice..

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! soren. ur comment makes my day gee. ;-)

I can recollect the times when I was younger. Saying that I am eighteen but what I truly intend to say is I remember my parents telling me not to worry and enjoy this life as a child while I could. I loved childhood so easy and fun. Did I live it to the fullest and enjoy it enough that is still a question that boggles my brain. I wouldn't take anything back. I guess that just focuses on one part but I can most definitely connect with getting into a zone when doing something creative and the world passes by while you are stopped in time. Nice little piece of reading bubbly I loved it.

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! bleaf. u ve touched upon the essence beautifully with, the world passes by while you are stopped in time.

and i m glad u liked it. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

Punishment
(not registered user)

Wow, this is lovely :)

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! punishment. thanx for liking CIMA. lol. ;-)

This is a very interesting beginning you have here! Reading the beginning about her writing her novel as more of a self-memoir within a fictional story makes me wonder how much of this story is you, LOL. I think we can all identify with having to write in our spare time and having worlds within worlds in our head. I also like how much we learn about her just by her going through her morning routine. Please let me know about the new chapters! ~Em

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! emily. that home is mine but that character is another reader on booksie. and i was wondering, how it d be to be in love when it doesnt actually make news. (teens and twenties thrive in love.) many of booksie readers ll find them in it as my interaction has given me an insight to them and i ve incorporated that. they ll know it. lol. ;-)

bubbly your work is amazing I want to see you achieve a novel. While my favorite is fantasy your achievements are also great. You are terrific at describing the life of a writer. The concentration needed and the waste of how easily it is broken. I likke this idea. Can't wait to see more. Message me for updates on new works. I really wish u'd check me out o. I need to nkow how to get better. I need that concentration. Lol. talk at ya later.

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! arch. once u deeply become involved in writing, ur concentration wont be broken (not even by noise). for ur masterpiece ll shape the thinking of readers.

thanx but i cant think of a novel. time is a big casualty here. but i wish u well. lol. ;-)

I love it. You're a very good writer. Great job!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! fp. thnax for a lovely compliment. lol. ;-)

Hi bubbly,

Well I already have my prince charming, and have yet to read a romance novel. But I'm sure someday I will.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! df. remember, love'll ever keep u rolling. i wish u a wonderful life with him always. may all the treasures of this world be yours and u live happily ever after. (fairy tale, my dear.) reading about someone in love and together, fills me with all good feelings. world looks beautiful and hope thrives. take care. lol. ;-)

hm, a few punctuation errors and maybe this chapter could've been lengthened a bit.
but other than that I thought this was written fairly well:]

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! emily. thanx for the constructive suggestions. it is analytical thinking of readers like u that shapes a writing. thanx for letting me know of these and i'll improve on it. lol. ;-)

B,

Love knows no age it only knows the heart! this is lovely, I love how the distraction sent the story into a distraction of thoughts through the mc. I cannot wait to read more tis' very interesting.

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! craz. u've said it - love knows only heart. love is a wonderful feeling - it keep u seeking for more and the other doles it out in large measures.

thanx for liking the story so far. lol. ;-)

heya bubbly. Thanks for the good read. I always enjoy a nice romance novel. Age is but a number wen it comes to finding love. My aunt got married when she was 51 and I've never in my life seen two people more inlove....

Let me know when you've published the next chapter okay?

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dom. u've said it all - age is but a number.

u know, my mom's younger sis got married at 30 and that gave tension to everyone for it was considered too "old". my grand father was extremely concerned and everyday was a nightmare for my aunt in that conservative set-up. the day she got married, all those talks were put on hold but her example is still live. she is still considered a reference point for late marriage. darn them all!

people should update their thinking and celebrate love at any age. it is better than war at any time. probably, that's why romance still tops on bestseller's list.

thanx for letting me know about ur aunt. long live love. lol. ;-)

heya bubbly. Thanks for the good read. I always enjoy a nice romance novel. Age is but a number wen it comes to finding love. My aunt got married when she was 51 and I've never in my life seen two people more inlove....

Let me know when you've published the next chapter okay?

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dom. u've said it all - age is but a number.

u know, my mom's younger sis got married at 30 and that gave tension to everyone for it was considered too "old". my grand father was extremely concerned and everyday was a nightmare for my aunt in that conservative set-up. the day she got married, all those talks were put on hold but her example is still live. she is still considered a reference point for late marriage. darn them all!
people should update their thinking and celebrate love at any age. it is better than war at any time. probably, that's why romance still tops on bestseller's list.

thanx for letting me know about ur aunt. long live love. lol. ;-)

Wow!

THis story was discriptive yet outspoken and very lifelike,

I could just picture sohpia head bent over book

I just wish you could have put better detail of Sophia in the book....

example:
Sophia trotted down the stairs,blond hair flowing behind her. Her hair short cropped hair dancing around her tanned face.

I think you should add more detail of the character

other then that it was excellent

panda11

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! panda. readers like u give ideas and ur input'll make me incorporate this in the next chapter. a keen reader is always a welcome and a pleasure to answer to. and u fulfill both the aspects. u sure do know how to keep my grey cells ticking. lol. ;-)

Okay..I know I'm like really late on this but this was AMAZING! I got sucked in from the very first sentence. I can almost smell the romance to come soon (I hope)!

Continue to write this story and PLEASE update me when you have a new chapter because I want to continue.

It's like I'm reading a book but I can't turn the page. I'm so eager to turn the page! Please write more


-IcyDibs402

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dibs. ur comment is extremely encouraging. writers like u can move mountains with ur words, i'm but human. this is exhilarating. thanx for such a cheerful comment. lol. ;-)

i like it a lot Bubbly
i think you should give her hair and eye color in the next part too

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! gigi. how about the length of nails and does she chew on them while thinking. but hair and eye color seem novel. hmm. i can write one chapter each on hair (he falls in love with hair first) and eyes (he enters her heart via eyelock). wow. sounds mushy, eh! gee. ;-)

Wow....Um wow. lol

This is so well written I feel like I was there. I like your idea of writing about adults who fall in love. It seems like all we read about these days is seventeen year olds who can't get a date to prom or who can't seem to get over their ex.

I can't wait for more!

Two really big thumbs up! =)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! hannah. thanx a lot for a heart-warming comment. i guess, love remains same be it at any age. for hearts never change. true love ll find its match. gee. ;-)

that`ss great

keep it up bubbly =]

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! chumb. thanx for a wonderful comment. lol. ;-)

It was good, cant wait til u update

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kidz. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

Wow, you are an artist my new friend. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! brit. thanx for liking CIMA. lol. ;-)

This is off to a great start..I like it a lot. You definitely have a very real talent. :)

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! f. thanx for liking CIMA. coming from u, it is a big compliment. lol. ;-)

Hi there again Bubbly,

What I love about fiction is that we can create a whole world and yet wrap it in reality. There is so much of what writer's have to say that is close to our own emotions. Indeed Sophia would be bringing her own story into her novel and yet it gives us a glimpse into her own story. And your perhaps?

Judging from your other writing there is no doubt that you will provifde something with a little twist, quite unexpected perhaps?

Keep going, I'm intrigued and want to know what happens next.

Happy Days

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! da lee la. what u say is so true to all writers. v live through our writings and our lives find way there. romance is something i live by. i hope to do justice to it.

i m touched that u r looking forward to the next chapter. hope i come up to ur expectations. thanx again. lol. ;-)

you're a romantic person, aren't ya???

i love it!! you had me hooked with the fact that Sophia loved her career more than starting a relationship. it's like having a family is a burden to her. somehow i can relate to her situation. being in love with life but missing so much thing especially LOVE...lol!!!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! if. there is a writer on booksie, who was discussing her life. and it seemed fascinating. imagine, not getting married or not being into any relationship. yet going gungho on life. enjoying it in her own way and writing too. the late love angle to her life is my add-on. she was quite surprised. but she didn't shout at me. so i guess, it's her approval and i can carry on.

i don't want anyone lonesome, which is bittersome. twosome is bettersome. so let's see. lol. ;-)

Wow, this is good. I'm almost the same way, when im distracted i have a hard time gettin back into the mood of writing. This is a good one, awesome job! =D

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! l. thanx for liking CIMA. all us writers face the same frustration when our concentration is broken and all thoughts evaporate. take care. lol. ;-)

Good start. I can't add anything more than to say I'll follow you to the next chapter! :)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phoebe. thanx for an encouraging comment. this'll definitely make me write. take care. lol. ;-)

Wow...great job! Sorry for being so late to comment! I've been super busy. To be honest with you...I am very impatient to read stories b/c they're so long...poems are more my type but once I started reading this I loved it! The background was beautiful...I can't wait to hear what happens next! Warm regards...Zia

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! zia. its always a pleasure to receive a comment from u, no matter how late. life is pretty busy on booksie and that's understandable.

and it gladdens me no end that u enjoyed CIMA very much. that was the sole intention. lol. ;-)

Hi Bubbly this is awesome. I like her independance. Please let me know when you have updated.

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! leighlo. v all crave for freedom but somehow fall short. its this level of freedom that sets us apart. and thanx for liking it. i appreciate thaat very much. lol. ;-)

wow thats the first story thats intresting to me lol

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! thanx for such a lovely comment. this gladdens me no end. gee. ;-)

I really did tasted the beauty of the words and the smoothness of the expressions and above your chapter, i wish it is, made me long for the next phase.
I found it very interesting. please go on and don't make us wait for more time.
Good luck

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! brayan. thanx for liking CIMA. i'll be writing the next chapter soon. lol. ;-)

Amazing, rich in detail. Worth the read.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! marcus. thanx. i'm glad u liked it. lol. ;-)

A good start..will you be adding more chapters?

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! brooke. thanx. i'm glad u liked it. sure, i'll be adding another four chapters in near future. lol. ;-)

hey wow i really liked it..im kind of upset tho because im so new at writing and your so good at it!
ive never really tried to write much but i do hope you can help me become better if you could just commment on my vampire story...
i titled it "i dunno yet" (yes a dreadful title i know)
i dont think im author material cuz im and artist and a photographer i cant figure poeple out and definatley cant describe things but i want your opinion.pleeeeeeeeeez!!
thanks!

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ar. thanx for liking CIMA. and thanx for the compliment too. keep writing and one day u'll be amazed at how well u write and how much readers appreciate ur works. i'm sure u write excellently now also. u r just kidding me. lol. ;-)

Hello Bubbly,

Your story just blew me away!! I can really relate to all the gadgets that you stated in your story. How most of them have come and gone through our lifetime and soon so will everything else that is shiny, bright, and new.

Your description of Calgary was amazing and really makes me miss it. Actually, I live only 3 1/2 hours away and drive my uncle there 2 or 3 times a month to see his family as I have an aunt and cousin attending Art School there.

This is just a feeling that I got from reading your story. Please excuse me for asking! Forgive me and correct me if I am wrong but, is this story somewhat based upon you?

Love does seem much sweeter and get better as we age! Like a bottle of fine wine!

Posted: Nov 3, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! robert. thanx for a wonderful comment. i live in calgary and i'm in love but this story is based on a fan of mine on booksie. she's a busy career woman. i did discuss it with her and in fact took her permission. if u come to calgary, let me know about it. it'll be great to meet u. lol. ;-)

i love the way u put ur writting together.But...what do u know about LOVE, MARRIAGE AND SEX.

Posted: Nov 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! asin. thanx for liking CIMA and such lovely words. here, imagination is everything. this is fiction. lol. ;-)

this is great1 (u create a more human aspect to the story than usual romances0
:)

Posted: Nov 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! gendral. thanx for liking CIMA. i appreciate ur remark of finding it humane and romantic. lol. ;-)

I'm assuming there's a part 2. Off to look. :)

Posted: Dec 23, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lids. thanx for reading CIMA. yeah, there are five parts but i've not yet uploaded them. sorry. lol. ;-)



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