Caring, Loving, Kind, Wise, and Fair, and Brave, and True, Sweet, and Cheerful, and Bright. And, all these things are you. When I need help, You rescue me. You understand what no one else can. You hear me out, You know my thoughts. There is no word, That fits this more, You are, forever, Mom. In every problem, I canâÂÂt turn to anyone else. There is only Mom. You can be counted on. I admit, I cannot compare. I make mistakes, More often than I deserve. I have run out of chances at forgiveness. But a mother is FORGIVENESS
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Poem By: Sterling Pevensie
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This is for my mom. My english teacher said it was really beautiful, but she might have been lying. I don't know. Oh well, even if it's not beautiful, I would like to share it with you. It's very simple, but heartfelt. View table of contents...
Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 Reads: 31 Comments: 4 Likes: 5
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this was a really good poem. but try to put the word and on the last adj. so instead of and fair, and brave.... it'll be fair, brave....... and bright. :D or so i was taught. don't use too many commas, i'm still trying to improve on that myself. but the idea was really good. your teacher wasn't lying. i agree with her/him, you never said which. :]
Posted: Nov 19, 2008
very nice....captivating!
Posted: Nov 20, 2008
Well I thought it was really beautiful and sweet your so lucky you still have your mother with you! beautiful I love it! I would like to invite you to read some of my poetry see what you think? good luck!
Posted: Nov 20, 2008
I loved it sis! Great work! ;3
Posted: Nov 27, 2008
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