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Submitted: Apr 16, 2008 Reads: 98 Comments: 14 Likes: 11
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A Freash opinion, and I absolutely agree with every word you wrote in it's entirety. It destroys steriotypes, and I loath steriotypes. I would like to speak to you more, you should e-mail me at starskylife@hotmail.com, I hope to hear from you.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
I like this, sometimes there is so much energy lost in trying to find our identity. We (and others)should accept ourselves just the way we are. Good poem.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
Yes. What keeps us all a part from walking around like a chorus of zombies are our thoughts:)! We are all our selves-- and no one has the right to tear away our identities-- what makes us who we are. I loved the thought you put into this piece^_^! So I'll give you a like it button press:), because I liked it.
Lot's of chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
good poem. simple and sweet and makes you think.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
This was really good. I don't know who I am, but I hope, that one day, I will find me. But while the journey is taking place, I am just getting on with life. This is really really good. Usually people rant on an on about how they just can't find it. I was one of those people not long ago. But I like this.
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
I think I know who I am now - well I'm getting to know who I am. But recently something has come up in my life that has made me take a step back and ask myself this same question - who am I? I think that your name, nationality, beliefs (not necessarily religion) play a great part of who you are. But i don't think it's a question that we, the reader, can answer - It's something that the we can only discover by ourselves.
Keep up the great work Bubbly, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Olola.
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
I think this is what a lot of young people struggle with these days. They grow up with so many influences, they loose themselves in the midst of everything. Yes names, nationality, and beliefs, whether religious or not do play a role in a person's identity, but maybe there is something with in the soul of the person and their essence that distinguishes them from others. I hope that everyone can find themselves in the midst of this chaotic world.
~Kaori
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
awww...i like this
it's so true and it really makes you think about yourself and how you treat others
good job ^^
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
A philosopher named Simon Blackburn thought that all people might be zombies, looking and acting just like us, but these zombies had no conscience thought. They were like ghosts with bodies, I think. Just thought that was cool. L8er!
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
Yes all too true. I hate people that judge and put labels on others. It stunts peoples growth and we are all unique and loved and accepted in Gods eyes.
Posted: Apr 22, 2008
Very well written, and nicely put.
Posted: Apr 23, 2008
Wow this is great. do you mind if i print this off and post it up in my locker???? it would be cool to be in there to inspire me everytime i open it.
Posted: Apr 23, 2008
This poem was really really great!I liked it.A bit deep,but still not so deep in the same time....It was great!:)
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
Did you write this about me?! I have always felt that way! I am perfectly happy being who I am, and I love myself for who I am!
Posted: Oct 27, 2008
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